tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8477327784029759611.post493311736887020536..comments2018-01-16T14:54:28.548-06:00Comments on Supajoe's Art Blog: New Marvel PagesAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01831412110417648179noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8477327784029759611.post-49231001024420004982010-01-22T15:33:57.222-06:002010-01-22T15:33:57.222-06:00Thanks, Michael! That's a good point about wh...Thanks, Michael! That's a good point about where Mary is. Originally on page 2, her appearance was a wider shot, and you could see she was leaning on the door behind DD on his left. Patch suggested I tighten her reveal, but I really wish I'd at least added in another panel with a wide shot to establish her location.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01831412110417648179noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8477327784029759611.post-80844515243723402842010-01-21T17:23:56.878-06:002010-01-21T17:23:56.878-06:00Excellent work Joe! Your rendering is tight and c...Excellent work Joe! Your rendering is tight and clean without being stiff and you've captured a real sense of bodies in space.<br /><br />I get a little confused in the first few panels in terms of where DD is landing in relationship to Mary but the fight is well-choreographed and there are some nice inventive bits like the cut to the fire in her eye.<br /><br />Kudos!Michael Lapinskihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03212539351021166409noreply@blogger.com